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To Write Love On Her Arms-V2 by ~Radio-Frequency:iconRadio-Frequency:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


The cruelty against those lost,
is forgetting them or choosing not to care,
and though it happens day after day,
it is too much for one to bear.

She is hurting herself as a sign for attention,
she longs for the loving eye,
she awaits the moment when one will see her,
and thank them that she won't have to die.

We are the ones who are specially chosen,
to embrace and heal her harms,
we are the ones who must reach out,
to write love on her arms.

A lost generation they have become,
a joy they all have forgot,
the truth is simple, the answer is,
they are dying...........love must not.
©2009 ~Radio-Frequency
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Author's Comments

The second version of To Write Love On Her Arms. This is how the two work:

The first version shows a daughter who wishes to be loved by her mother and her mother in turn loves her back. It is a singular form referring to one person.
In this one, "she" is referring to the lost and forgotten of the world. To Write Love On Her Arms, means we must reach out and touch those who are lost and have no hope.

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~Psycho-hobbit Apr 20, 2009, 10:59:35 AM
love it! very emotive and cleverly written.

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Tidyness! peh!! I can't get inspiration from order, my ideas are spawned from chaos!
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~Radio-Frequency Apr 20, 2009, 11:02:56 AM
Thank you, I felt that it was unfinished and that I had to write on more

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But if you need someone to set you free...
You be the door, I'll be the key...

I am a proud leader of this group:
~The--Adventure

And I am a member of these groups:
~Live-Love-Write

*photographicpoetclub
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~Psycho-hobbit Apr 20, 2009, 11:11:33 AM
well it was definatly worth the extra effort, it's very polished!

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Tidyness! peh!! I can't get inspiration from order, my ideas are spawned from chaos!
:iconradio-frequency:
~Radio-Frequency Apr 20, 2009, 11:12:54 AM
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it

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But if you need someone to set you free...
You be the door, I'll be the key...

I am a proud leader of this group:
~The--Adventure

And I am a member of these groups:
~Live-Love-Write

*photographicpoetclub
:iconpsycho-hobbit:
~Psycho-hobbit Apr 20, 2009, 11:27:58 AM
you're welcome you deserve the praise.

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Tidyness! peh!! I can't get inspiration from order, my ideas are spawned from chaos!
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~Iluvocnj2006 Apr 20, 2009, 1:20:17 PM
Oh excellent! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! :)

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And so we know and rely on the love God has for us.
God is love. Whoever lives in love lives in God, and God in him. ~1 John 4:16

*Live-Love-Write, *photographicpoetclub, =PhotomanipulatorClub, *ProjectComment
:iconradio-frequency:
~Radio-Frequency Apr 20, 2009, 1:21:23 PM
Thank you for your compliment. I am also releasing a new four part poetry series entitled ,"Seasons of Time". I hope you'll check it out

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But if you need someone to set you free...
You be the door, I'll be the key...

I am a proud leader of this group:
~The--Adventure

And I am a member of these groups:
~Live-Love-Write

*photographicpoetclub
:iconiluvocnj2006:
~Iluvocnj2006 Apr 20, 2009, 1:23:35 PM
I will. :) Can't wait.

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And so we know and rely on the love God has for us.
God is love. Whoever lives in love lives in God, and God in him. ~1 John 4:16

*Live-Love-Write, *photographicpoetclub, =PhotomanipulatorClub, *ProjectComment
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